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PuppyChow February 8th, 13 02:09 AM

tight swim
 
Name: Clinton Dunn's
Eyes:brown
Age:17
Hair:light light brown
Lazy today lol
OK start off in a race and your winning

Yaoibuttwannabe February 8th, 13 02:23 AM

Name: James John
Eyes: green
Age:16
Hair: Blond

"Come on, I can do it," James said to himself, as he forced himself to swim faster, leading the race.

PuppyChow February 8th, 13 02:26 AM

Noo I have to win but slowes down said out loud darn

Yaoibuttwannabe February 8th, 13 02:52 AM

(What? Sorry, but I can't read that.)

PuppyChow February 8th, 13 03:08 AM

0_0 sorry I said noo I have to win but slows down tells him self darn

Yaoibuttwannabe February 8th, 13 03:13 AM

(Ok, I still can't read that. Maybe try putting " " around the words he speaks, and putting comma's to seperate the actions. Perhaps adding some names, and making it readable?)

PuppyChow February 8th, 13 03:18 AM

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Yaoibuttwannabe February 8th, 13 03:19 AM

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PuppyChow February 8th, 13 03:23 AM

............................. :)

Yaoibuttwannabe February 8th, 13 11:26 AM

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