What do You think about...

[TrueBeautiflDarkness]

Hezzo!

The amazing me is back with more fire power than ever!!

Okay, just joking on that last part, honestly! Anyways, I've just grown to the point where, while trying to think up ways to continue my other story's, I'll go on with yet another one! Only because I have this really amazing idea in my head and all of this other stuff. Buut, There are a few problems. First off, I need more motivation for how my characters look. As in, help in finding their 'description'. Normally I'll just google for some cute anime boy or sexy anime boy (depending on if their seme or uke) and all that, but as of late, I can't seem to find any pictures that meet my needs for this story. Now I am not sure if this is a real reason to be posting here, so don't freak out just yet! I do have other things I would like to talk about, first of all. I want to know if anyone has any idea's that they would like to see in a story. Such as something happening, or the kind of characters, I don't really plan on telling much about my story that is cooking up in my head, simply because I feel like I'm being watched and that someone might for some reason, take the idea and morph it into their own, I'm just a freak like that okay? But anyways, to help with those helping me find the description I need for my story, here is some information you might need.

UKE:

Name: Asuka Kawaishma
Age: 19 (Though looks kind of young, like 16-17)
Height: 4'10
Weight: 98lb
Hair: Black
Eyes: (Either Blue, or purple)
Personality: Shy and very girly, though strong in fighting and very smart


SEME:

Name: Azumi Cross
Age: 23
Height: 6'2
Weight: 198
Hair: Black
Eyes: Dark Blue or brown
Personality: Cold and cruel, loves to tease the person he loves and wants nothing more than to make him his possession however necessary. (Comes off as the bad guy, but soon has the UKE falling for him)

*Note, this is meant to be a twisted and dark story and I honestly don't know how anyone would think of this, It is just something I personally want to write about. So if you're not into this kind of thing, please just scamper along!

[naive_subseed]

Lol. why not add me.
Ed.
Age:19.5
height:6'1''
weight 150
hair: brown soft curl. it only curls when i grow it out. otherwise, it's just wavy.
Features: thick eyebrows over brooding eyes. masculin eyes, but effemenite jaw and curved lips.
Nationality: hispanic. so dark skin.

Personality: a threat to both, since i'm versatile like that. I'd play off of Asuka's approachability to make Azumi jelous, then when azumi approaches me i'd challenge his domination to play off his need for power and lessen or greaten my dominance struggle to draw him in since he needs to beat me. In the end, i'd only be truly happy when both of them have completely forgotten about each other.

Why this might work: if it's just two characters, the real threat to the relationship is themselves. A couple ending because one of them got bored or the other one was never fully realized in the relationship can get a little real. in yaoi's i feel like this might fail because seme uke relationships have a one sided-ness to them.
With an outside threat the story has a foreseeable resolve. I would have a portion of them getting to know each other a little before I come it. Eventually it can be about if they can withstand another man, or will they fall victim to Ed.
Ed wins. Ed wins. Bwa ha ha.

P.S. I'm not a sociopath. I'm actually a pretty nice guy. I just like reading Dostoevsky. So i feel love is the juncture of manipulation, suffering, and epiphany, however you want to see it.

[Wendy]

I think that your characters could work, whenever ther aren't so original. But if you're a good writer, then you will make such a wonderful story.
Is important that the personality of your characters deal with the mood of the story, the ambient, and other stuff related. They have to be focused, or they cannot work out properly or just the way you want ^^
Besides, as i don't know the plot or some general info about the line, I cannot tell you much more 'bout my impressions

[Wendy]

I think that your characters could work, whenever ther aren't so original. But if you're a good writer, then you will make such a wonderful story.
Is important that the personality of your characters deal with the mood of the story, the ambient, and other stuff related. They have to be focused, or they cannot work out properly or just the way you want ^^
Besides, as i don't know the plot or some general info about the line, I cannot tell you much more 'bout my impressions