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Old December 28th, 08, 12:06 AM   #1
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XxXGomenasaiXxX [[ANGST]]

*~*Prolgue*~*

It was heavily raining as the adolescent teen stood alone staring at the bloodshot sky, letting the raindroplets wash his eyes and the stains of blood on his cheeks. He shivered as he grasped tightly onto the bat that was drenched in blood as so were his clothes but continued to be melting off due to the extreme weather. He sobbed quitely as he collapsed to his knees and whispered a small chant.

"Gomenasai, Gomenasai, Gomenasai, Gomenasai, Gomenasai, Gomenasai..."

He continued saying this over and over again, crying harder dropping the bloody bat aside letting the rain completely clensing off the rest of the blood and dug his nails into his soft highlighted colored hair hiding his soaked face covered in tears. Wishing the dead body behind him would disinigrate into the earth, never able to look at his hideous sight again.

[[So what did you think? Anyone wanna start off with the first chapter? Btw "Gomenasai" is japanese for "I'm sorry" if you didn't know XD]]
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Old April 30th, 09, 02:26 PM   #2
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[[COOL... I'll continue this... Hmm... If you don't want my continuation, just say so ok? I'm not that good of a writer... ^_^]]


CHAPTER ONE

"Itekimasu, Oka~san!" A nicely built, handsome, silver haired, young man said to his mom. "Don't forget your bento, son!" replied his mom. "I won't mom. Jah neh~".

The day was perfect. The sun was bright, the wind was cool, the feeling of winter was almost upon him. As he walked towards the gate of his school, an extatic young man greeted him.

"Ohayo gozaimasu, Shiro~sama!" the young man greeted. "Ohayo, Tajima~kun" replied Shiro.
His bestfriend, almost a brother due to their bond, was a slightly shorter than him. Has a strong built body and black hair.

"Let's walk to our room together, Shiro~sama! Onegai?"

"How many times have I told you, Tajima, DO NOT address me like that! I'm not your master or anything of that sort. You know that well, don't you?"

"Go...Gomen..."

"..sigh.. C'mon let's just go..."

"Ha..Hai..."







[[Please continue... I know it's not that good, heck it's not good at all, but please continue it... T_T]]
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Old April 30th, 09, 10:47 PM   #3
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No that's perfect o.o and I can't believe someone actually responded to this shit XD

As he walked by he noticed a very meloncholy, withdrawn boy staring at the sky. This mysterious boy sighed as he gazed at the distance with his dead emotionless eyes as though there was nothing living inside of him. Tajima stood there feeling as if everyone around him completely dissapeared. It was just him and that boy now...

Who is he...?

He thought.

Sorry in night school now. everything sounds crappy and I dunno if this story RP-ing is the kind to either make up stuff or the rp as one character DX
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Old May 1st, 09, 09:44 AM   #4
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It seemed like hours have passed since he first set his eyes on the mysterious figure. It seemed as though he was getting closer and closer to the figure. But all of it was disturbed by one harsh yet concerned call.

"Oi, Tajima! If your going to continue whatever it is that your going, we are going to be late for sure! Let's go!"

"Ha..Hai, Shiro~sama."

Tajima's mind was still occupied by the boy he saw before. His mind was full of questions yet to be answered.

"Who is he?"

"Why was he there?"

"Why did he look like that?"

All of these questions kept running through his mind over and over until his head was hurting.
His face looked strained, thus attracting Shiro's attention.

"Oi, are you ok?






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Old May 1st, 09, 11:49 PM   #5
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Oh no...your very good XD I'm the one with no talent since I slack off alot >w<

Tajima looked over to see an older boy with longish red hair in a pony tail. The upperclassmen looked puzzled as he poked his forehead. "I'm a transfer student from Hokkaido, they call me Kurugi Azou. Why do you seem so spaced out, your one of my Kouhais aren't you?" He says this as he smiles in the morning sunlight.
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Old May 2nd, 09, 01:22 AM   #6
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[[Nice.. ^_^ Thanks, but I really think you have great talent for writing, so keep it up.. ^__^ You seem to like Tajima, don't you? hehe, just guessing.]]


Tajima blushed a little when he saw his senpai.

"Ha..Hai..!"

Kurugi looked shocked and confused. He doesn't seem to understand the guy he just met.

"Mmm... Don't just say 'yes'. I asked why you were so spaced out just now. Well, I'm not forcing you or anything, I was just wondering..."

Tajima turned his head on another direction and staring at the distance.

"I....I was just... that boy.."

"Eh? ...sigh... well, that's close enough-"

His sentence was cut by Shiro who was coming over to see what's keeping Tajima from moving.

"OI!!! Tajima!! I told you to get movi-"

He stopped as he saw another guy standing near Tajima. he looked at him sternly and checking him from head to toe. He then looked at Tajima that was still blushing and staring at his senpai.

"Who's your new friend, Tajima?"

Tajima heared the voice of his friend. He then came back to his former extatic self.

"Hi Shiro~sama! This is Kurugi. Kurugi, this is Shiro~sama. Shiro~sama, Kurugi. He says he's a transfer student from Hokkaido."






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It's ok! ^^

"It's nice to meet both of you, Tajima...and Shirou is it? Are you two first years or second years? Sadly, I'm in my third. I hope it doesn't get too lonely once I graduate this year if we ever get close."

He says this as he scratches the back of his head laughing nervously.

"Kurugi-sempai is a senior..?"

Shirou whispered under his breath to Tajima.
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[[COOL... But I never thought of that... Do you want to make Tajima and Shirou first years or second? I think it should be second. But it's your story, so if you want to change it, just say so ok? I will immediately change it, ok? hehe ^_^]]




"Of course! Can't you tell by his face?"


Tajima replied with another whisper.


"Eh? Hmm... I don't know.. He looks kinda young to me..."


"Well, he's a senior and that's that, Shirou~sama."


Kurugi noticed the two whispering to each other and felt left out. He then noticed his wrist watch and saw that it was just another minute until class starts.


"Ah-, gomen, but I think we should REALLY be getting to class..."

He nervously interrupted their whispering.
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That's fine by me! ^^

After interrupting their small chat, he waved with a sweet smile of his. "Well then, I'll be seeing you two...how bout at lunch or after school? Meet me here, Ja ne!" He suddenly dashed into the distance leaving them stare at him from afar. Shirou blushed watching Kurugi but Tajima pulled onto his sleeve to grab his attention.

"Shirou-sama! We should get going too!"

He nodded trying to shrug off his embarrassement.
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When they got to class, most of the students were there. Lucky for them, the teacher wasn't around yet.

"Hah...Ha..Hah..."

Tajima couldn't speak. He was busy catching his breath after running towards their classroom.

"See? If we hadn't met that Kurugi guy we should've gotten here sooner."

Shirou said as he was trying to catch his own breath too. He blushed as he noticed that he didn't address Kurugi properly.

"I mean, Kurugi-senpai"

Tajima noticed Shirou blushing. He was going to ask why but the teacher has already arrived. They hurriedly sat onto their seats. As their classes went by, Shirou and Tajima's mind were pre-occupied by thoughts of Kurugi. Time passed by quickly until they heard the ring of the bell.

"IT'S LUNCHTIME!!!"

Both of them exclaimed, jumping from their seats.
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